Hello, all. I'm embarking on a new project, and I hope to be evaluated for it. An important part of the work I'm compiling is a musical based on alternative rock music around a central concept, basically a rock opera. Think of Pink Floyd, for example. The concept is of a girl's life. She isn't me, by the way, I like to write about more interesting things. I'm putting up drafts of song lyrics to be used, starting with the Nature Girl Rock Opera Intro. If received well, I may compile these into the main plot of the story, but first they have to be received. So I'm asking you to please read them, please comment on them, please tell me what they're communicating to you and please tell me where you think I'm going wrong.